The troll rock, Friday, 17 February
I left the house at 9 late start i know anyway i had breakfast next walked out of the cosy little cottage into the forest.
accordingly to Rufus he had heard a growling noise last night and today he picked up on a sent so we where following it until it abruptly stoped at a large rock at first i thought it was just a rock but I looked closer and it turned out to be a troll rock! so of course i had to draw it in my note book since I had never seen a troll rock in my life.
So as the day went on and i became very engrossed in my drawing dispite this i kept it in the back of my mind that as soon a the sun went down i wold be time to run for our lives!
later I heard a tiny crack but it was only small so i told myself it was just my imagining and it was totally fine but then i heard it again i was about to leave but…. IT WAS TO LATE!! THE TROLL HAD WOKEN UP! RUFUS RUN!!!! We ran and ran we hid behind a tree and hoped for the best luckily the troll ran right past us thank goodness its gone i said to Rufus.
Great use of connectives Lorelei! Remember to always proof read and edit your writing before submitting it. Pay special attention to punctuation and capital letters.